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	<description>SF Writer Steven Gould</description>
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		<title>Comment on What I Said by Christopher</title>
		<link>http://eatourbrains.com/steve/?p=1165&#038;cpage=1#comment-14277</link>
		<dc:creator>Christopher</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 22 May 2013 07:37:26 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[I recognized all but the last two of those, and I haven&#039;t read some of them in *years.*  (I&#039;ve never read &quot;the Witches&quot; or &quot;the Last Unicorn.&quot;)

My favorite of them all, I think, is &quot;Have Spacesuit, Will Travel.&quot;  It was my first Heinlein book, and it&#039;s still my favorite of his &quot;juvenile books.&quot;]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I recognized all but the last two of those, and I haven&#8217;t read some of them in *years.*  (I&#8217;ve never read &#8220;the Witches&#8221; or &#8220;the Last Unicorn.&#8221;)</p>
<p>My favorite of them all, I think, is &#8220;Have Spacesuit, Will Travel.&#8221;  It was my first Heinlein book, and it&#8217;s still my favorite of his &#8220;juvenile books.&#8221;</p>
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		<title>Comment on JUMPER by JCB</title>
		<link>http://eatourbrains.com/steve/?page_id=5&#038;cpage=1#comment-14272</link>
		<dc:creator>JCB</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 21 May 2013 15:41:59 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Just finished &quot;Jumper&quot; (hard cover) and found two typos. Might help for Kindle version (perhaps they&#039;ve been fixed) or reprint. I could find no other way to contact you.
(1) Page 331, 3rd paragraph: &quot;The men in the pit wre responsible for taking away the women I loved.&quot;  Change &quot;wre&quot; to &quot;were.&quot;
(2) Page 343, 7th paragraph: &quot;I won&#039;t push it. But If you ever go public?&quot;  Lowercase &quot;i&quot; in &quot;if.&quot;
That&#039;s all I found so far. I haven&#039;t gotten to work for hours because I couldn&#039;t put it down.  Now I&#039;m afraid to get &quot;Reflex&quot;!]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Just finished &#8220;Jumper&#8221; (hard cover) and found two typos. Might help for Kindle version (perhaps they&#8217;ve been fixed) or reprint. I could find no other way to contact you.<br />
(1) Page 331, 3rd paragraph: &#8220;The men in the pit wre responsible for taking away the women I loved.&#8221;  Change &#8220;wre&#8221; to &#8220;were.&#8221;<br />
(2) Page 343, 7th paragraph: &#8220;I won&#8217;t push it. But If you ever go public?&#8221;  Lowercase &#8220;i&#8221; in &#8220;if.&#8221;<br />
That&#8217;s all I found so far. I haven&#8217;t gotten to work for hours because I couldn&#8217;t put it down.  Now I&#8217;m afraid to get &#8220;Reflex&#8221;!</p>
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		<title>Comment on As of 1 July  2013 by Chris</title>
		<link>http://eatourbrains.com/steve/?p=1147&#038;cpage=1#comment-14228</link>
		<dc:creator>Chris</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 12 May 2013 10:40:56 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Congratulations! It is well deserved. Your work remains fresh after many years of enjoyment. Well done!]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Congratulations! It is well deserved. Your work remains fresh after many years of enjoyment. Well done!</p>
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		<title>Comment on As of 1 July  2013 by Tony</title>
		<link>http://eatourbrains.com/steve/?p=1147&#038;cpage=1#comment-14227</link>
		<dc:creator>Tony</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 12 May 2013 10:20:19 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Been a sci-fi/fantasy fan for over 30 years and a fan of your work since I stumbled onto Jumper in the local library in &#039;93. Congratulations on being elected the 27th president of the Science Fiction and Fantasy Writers of America.
Thank you for your work.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Been a sci-fi/fantasy fan for over 30 years and a fan of your work since I stumbled onto Jumper in the local library in &#8217;93. Congratulations on being elected the 27th president of the Science Fiction and Fantasy Writers of America.<br />
Thank you for your work.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Impulse by Julien</title>
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		<dc:creator>Julien</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 11 May 2013 11:51:31 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[I hope to read this book in French soon.  a date ?]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I hope to read this book in French soon.  a date ?</p>
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		<title>Comment on As of 1 July  2013 by CNN Jim</title>
		<link>http://eatourbrains.com/steve/?p=1147&#038;cpage=1#comment-14217</link>
		<dc:creator>CNN Jim</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 10 May 2013 14:08:44 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Well done Steven.  COngratulations and looking forward to seeing your new novel.

Jim]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Well done Steven.  COngratulations and looking forward to seeing your new novel.</p>
<p>Jim</p>
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		<title>Comment on As of 1 July  2013 by SF&#38;F Reader</title>
		<link>http://eatourbrains.com/steve/?p=1147&#038;cpage=1#comment-14215</link>
		<dc:creator>SF&#38;F Reader</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 10 May 2013 02:36:31 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[That&#039;s excellent news!  Congrats!]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>That&#8217;s excellent news!  Congrats!</p>
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		<title>Comment on As of 1 July  2013 by Elizabeth</title>
		<link>http://eatourbrains.com/steve/?p=1147&#038;cpage=1#comment-14210</link>
		<dc:creator>Elizabeth</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 08 May 2013 17:18:06 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Congratulations, and good luck in your tenure.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Congratulations, and good luck in your tenure.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Impulse by abigfan</title>
		<link>http://eatourbrains.com/steve/?page_id=962&#038;cpage=1#comment-14196</link>
		<dc:creator>abigfan</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 05 May 2013 15:39:06 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[also steve    your site is very hard to find  places like amazon and other big sellers of books among others  even Wikipedia dont have the  address   just figured id let u know something to look into  so more people can learn about your wonderful books]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>also steve    your site is very hard to find  places like amazon and other big sellers of books among others  even Wikipedia dont have the  address   just figured id let u know something to look into  so more people can learn about your wonderful books</p>
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		<title>Comment on Impulse by abigfan</title>
		<link>http://eatourbrains.com/steve/?page_id=962&#038;cpage=1#comment-14195</link>
		<dc:creator>abigfan</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 05 May 2013 15:37:25 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[i had  a question for you steve       are there any other  non jumper books coming out soon or are u focused on impulse promoting and its sequel        also after the manuscript is turned in in june  how long until you will let us know  how it went  and when its due out:)]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>i had  a question for you steve       are there any other  non jumper books coming out soon or are u focused on impulse promoting and its sequel        also after the manuscript is turned in in june  how long until you will let us know  how it went  and when its due out:)</p>
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		<title>Comment on 7th SIGMA by Jim</title>
		<link>http://eatourbrains.com/steve/?page_id=506&#038;cpage=1#comment-14110</link>
		<dc:creator>Jim</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 11 Apr 2013 02:33:26 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[As much as I have loved the Jumper series, 7th Sigma has been a greater delight.  I&#039;ve reread it several times, but the characters, the terse yet rich dialog, and the unique setting alway bring me back.  Like many others, I hope that you will revisit this place.  

Thanks.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>As much as I have loved the Jumper series, 7th Sigma has been a greater delight.  I&#8217;ve reread it several times, but the characters, the terse yet rich dialog, and the unique setting alway bring me back.  Like many others, I hope that you will revisit this place.  </p>
<p>Thanks.</p>
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		<title>Comment on 7th SIGMA by Dave McCarthy</title>
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		<dc:creator>Dave McCarthy</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 10 Apr 2013 15:48:14 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[A great read with a few caveats. I liked the depictions of the desert, though it seemed more like Arizona than New Mexico to me. With regard to plot, pacing, etc. I&#039;d just like to enthusiastically second what&#039;s been said above. I also liked the fact that you acknowledged Rudyard Kipling. (sp?)
The caveat I mentioned concerns the bugs. The implication is that they&#039;re solar powered, but the total energy available within a reasonably bug-sized area seems insufficient to support their activities. (Conservation laws bite so many good ideas.) Still, a good book. I&#039;m glad I read it and hope to see more set in this world.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>A great read with a few caveats. I liked the depictions of the desert, though it seemed more like Arizona than New Mexico to me. With regard to plot, pacing, etc. I&#8217;d just like to enthusiastically second what&#8217;s been said above. I also liked the fact that you acknowledged Rudyard Kipling. (sp?)<br />
The caveat I mentioned concerns the bugs. The implication is that they&#8217;re solar powered, but the total energy available within a reasonably bug-sized area seems insufficient to support their activities. (Conservation laws bite so many good ideas.) Still, a good book. I&#8217;m glad I read it and hope to see more set in this world.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Ur Doin&#8217; It Wrong by steve</title>
		<link>http://eatourbrains.com/steve/?p=1115&#038;cpage=1#comment-14052</link>
		<dc:creator>steve</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 28 Mar 2013 17:40:22 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Don&#039;t have the mechanism but here&#039;s a bunch of +1&#039;s and Like&#039;s, Cat.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Don&#8217;t have the mechanism but here&#8217;s a bunch of +1&#8242;s and Like&#8217;s, Cat.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Ur Doin&#8217; It Wrong by Cat Rambo</title>
		<link>http://eatourbrains.com/steve/?p=1115&#038;cpage=1#comment-14051</link>
		<dc:creator>Cat Rambo</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 28 Mar 2013 16:01:31 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[This is something I end up spending some time on the classes. To use social media effectively, you have to put some time and effort into it, and actually be...social.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>This is something I end up spending some time on the classes. To use social media effectively, you have to put some time and effort into it, and actually be&#8230;social.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Ur Doin&#8217; It Wrong by steve</title>
		<link>http://eatourbrains.com/steve/?p=1115&#038;cpage=1#comment-14034</link>
		<dc:creator>steve</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 24 Mar 2013 01:45:27 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[No idea.  I suspect he has an app or service that is posting the tweets as well, cause they appear like clockwork cycling through his four titles.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>No idea.  I suspect he has an app or service that is posting the tweets as well, cause they appear like clockwork cycling through his four titles.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Ur Doin&#8217; It Wrong by Dean Jameson</title>
		<link>http://eatourbrains.com/steve/?p=1115&#038;cpage=1#comment-14033</link>
		<dc:creator>Dean Jameson</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 24 Mar 2013 00:08:49 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[It makes me wonder what the thought process is with a guy like Mr.. I mean, does he actually believe that the type of thing he&#039;s doing on Twitter is effectively connecting with his desired audience?]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>It makes me wonder what the thought process is with a guy like Mr.. I mean, does he actually believe that the type of thing he&#8217;s doing on Twitter is effectively connecting with his desired audience?</p>
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		<title>Comment on Impulse by TheLandYacht</title>
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		<dc:creator>TheLandYacht</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 23 Mar 2013 05:54:18 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Bought the hard copy a couple of days ago to go on the shelf with the rest.  Unfortunately, I&#039;m not in a position to cart a bunch of books around with me like I used to...and I don&#039;t have a Kindle so...I&#039;ll make a confession.

I...umm...borrowed a copy that I found online that can be read by ePub software on my computer.  I&#039;m so sorry, Steven.  Let me know if I owe ya anything, I try really hard to support my favorite authors &amp; I&#039;ve read every one of your books I can get my hands on multiple times.

Up to Chapter 12 so far...and it&#039;s just as great as the first Jumper book was so far.  Catching the flavor of the viewpoints from the different people (adult, young teen) is just right!]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Bought the hard copy a couple of days ago to go on the shelf with the rest.  Unfortunately, I&#8217;m not in a position to cart a bunch of books around with me like I used to&#8230;and I don&#8217;t have a Kindle so&#8230;I&#8217;ll make a confession.</p>
<p>I&#8230;umm&#8230;borrowed a copy that I found online that can be read by ePub software on my computer.  I&#8217;m so sorry, Steven.  Let me know if I owe ya anything, I try really hard to support my favorite authors &amp; I&#8217;ve read every one of your books I can get my hands on multiple times.</p>
<p>Up to Chapter 12 so far&#8230;and it&#8217;s just as great as the first Jumper book was so far.  Catching the flavor of the viewpoints from the different people (adult, young teen) is just right!</p>
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		<title>Comment on 7th SIGMA by marc</title>
		<link>http://eatourbrains.com/steve/?page_id=506&#038;cpage=1#comment-14019</link>
		<dc:creator>marc</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 20 Mar 2013 19:15:41 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[I&#039;ve recently finished this book and thoroughly enjoyed it.  I am a very slow (dyslexic) reader and yet I sped through this story in three days mostly on my bus ride to work.  

I really do hope Steven will return to this world with another book.  The characters and environments just keep pooping into my mind still a few weeks after finishing...   

Cheers Steven!]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;ve recently finished this book and thoroughly enjoyed it.  I am a very slow (dyslexic) reader and yet I sped through this story in three days mostly on my bus ride to work.  </p>
<p>I really do hope Steven will return to this world with another book.  The characters and environments just keep pooping into my mind still a few weeks after finishing&#8230;   </p>
<p>Cheers Steven!</p>
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		<title>Comment on Impulse by Severin</title>
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		<dc:creator>Severin</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 19 Mar 2013 19:46:41 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Purchasing this now.  I&#039;ve been backpacking around England for the last couple months.  Am back in the States and am eager to finally dig into this.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Purchasing this now.  I&#8217;ve been backpacking around England for the last couple months.  Am back in the States and am eager to finally dig into this.</p>
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		<title>Comment on IMPULSE SALE by Chris</title>
		<link>http://eatourbrains.com/steve/?p=1094&#038;cpage=1#comment-14005</link>
		<dc:creator>Chris</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 13 Mar 2013 23:03:48 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[I only just found out that Impulse even existed!  Very excited for this.  I have read Jumper every year since it was first given to me by my now late uncle.  It was also his favorite book.  A great deal of daydreaming has involved where and what I would do if I could Jump.  I&#039;m three chapters in to Impulse and enjoying every bit of it.  Thank you for writing another installment!]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I only just found out that Impulse even existed!  Very excited for this.  I have read Jumper every year since it was first given to me by my now late uncle.  It was also his favorite book.  A great deal of daydreaming has involved where and what I would do if I could Jump.  I&#8217;m three chapters in to Impulse and enjoying every bit of it.  Thank you for writing another installment!</p>
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